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Among many electronic devices, my favorite one is my laptop. I never thought it would become such an important thing in my life, but when I started using it I realized that I could not live without it. My laptop is quite small and its color is grey; generally, it is not very attractive but it works effectively. The main reason I use the laptop is that I am doing a part-time job online, so I have to access to the Internet everyday. I also use the laptop when I need to talk to my friends or when I have to check e-mail. Moreover, when I get tired of this fast-paced life, laptop is a means of entertainment; I can listen to music, play some games, etc. all by my laptop. All in all, laptop is an electronic device which has made my life better.