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Advertising is the best tool for producers to promote their products; however, not all people like it because it has advantages and disadvantages.
Looking at the positive part, advertisements tell us about the products or the choices available in the market. Without advertisements we would have had very less choices of product to buy, buying a good product with all the features we are looking for, would have been very difficult. Further more, it creates many job opportunities and employs many people, hence helps in reducing unemployment.
On the other hand, these are some problems in advertising. Many advertisements are aimed on children who easily get carried away and insist parents to buy what they see in the advertisements. Not to mention, few people argue that some companies use obscene materials in their advertisements to attract views which pollutes viewers' minds especially that of younger ones.
To sum up, advertising is important for a company to sustain itself in the competitive market but companies should follow certain ethics and a code of conduct in order to eliminate harmful effects of advertising.
