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The ideal world I want to live will be a beautiful world. In this world, all cars that run on petrol will be replaced by solar cars, which have been around for a while, so the environment will become very wonderful. There will no longer be air pollution around us. Moreover, there will be no unemployment. All people will have jobs with high salary. When people have a good job, they will not any conflicts. Everybody will be less selfish, less violent, and more loving. In addition, we will use modern computers. Instead of typing on computers, we'll say the words and the computers will type them. Finally, the governments all over the world will set up national parks and wild-life preserves. Thanks to these places, animals will have a suitable habitat to survive and good conditions to grow and multiply. Above is my ideal world, I hope to live in this world someday.