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At present day, all of you have known about an internet. It is the one of the most popular invention in the twentieth century. I think we cannot imagine a computer works without the internet. It is playing a monumental role in our lives. Also it has more advantages.

First of all, now-a-days, every offices, hospitals, schools and colleges have been using this internet for various purposes. For instance, now all software companies are working with internet it is useful to them because every worker should collaborate with other workers. As well as hospitals, they should maintain every person details up to date. If necessary they would transfer the information through this internet. Also school students and university students would use this for browsing.

Secondly, the internet has been very important for surfing. It helps us save much time. For instance, when you need to look up the meaning of one word, you don't have to use a thick dictionary with several pages. With a computer connected

to the internet, you just need to type the phrase: “dictionary.com”, and press the “enter” button, there will be several sources for you to consult in less than 1 second!

Thirdly, the internet has made the world smaller. We can make friends with people from all the corners of the world and even work or study without going to the office or school. Much as you don't have time, you can still explore the diverse cultures of many different nations.

Eventually, as my opinion internet has more advantages than disadvantages because every person has been using for distinct reasons. For example me, I like cooking. So I would like to cook different verities such as Indian food, Chinese food, and American food. For this reason, I browse every day.